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I am weak because
I can't swim,
I can't fly.
I can't speak.
Because I am afraid of the
outside world.

I am weak because
I cry,
I let my emotions in my way,
I don't stand up,
I just die.

I am weak because,
when I was called a 
dumb birthday slut,
I just cried.
Because when I was bullied,
I just kept silent.
When I was thought of
having a disease,
suicide was my only thought.

But at the end I realised
that I am not weak,
I am strong.

I was strong enough to
not commit suicide,
to blossom from my cuts,
to speak for my own.

Because I was strong enough
to realise that no matter
what,
I will always be weak.

PandoraMichaelis
this is my inspiration for this poem -> [link]
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SPIKE295 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Well said.
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arcticwolf313 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is really emotional and i can relate to what its saying.....i love it!
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mistertrece Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Powerful as strong words, i really admire you and how you wrote it.
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PandoraMichaelis Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
aww thanks! :D
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vimmy-m Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stay strong buddy even if it gets hard
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PandoraMichaelis Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ive been trying to stay strong..and its been hard,but thanks to some people on here,ive been progressing slowly :D
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vimmy-m Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Good to hear you are getting support and may i share with you a little something that gets me through a hard day?[link]
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PandoraMichaelis Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow that was beautiful! :clap:
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vimmy-m Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks hope it helps :)
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authorofthings Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
nice poem. hope you're okay :)
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PandoraMichaelis Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks..and honestly im not ok..but thx for the concern
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authorofthings Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
oh, okay...
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JKL-Designs Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
wow...this is just beautiful, I love it, think you really did an amazing job on it..
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Toast435 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
This is so deep, I share your pain. Don't worry, you've got friends here on DeviantArt, and even though I don't know you at all.. if anyone bullies you on DeviantArt, I'll stand up for you ^^
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PandoraMichaelis Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks that is good to hear,and yeah ive been in a lil argumment here on DeviantART..but hey! I still mad it! even though im a little hurt ):
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Toast435 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Filmographer
Oh sweetie, I get in those all the time. No big deal, in fact I got in one earlier today. The person was extremely immature and blocked me (not the first time) but it was a petty argument over something incredibly stupid. Don't worry, I'll fight by your side. Thank you for the watch by the way.
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dragondave10 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Bravo, bravo.
This is a great poem to have here. No one is weak. We are all strong in any aspect. Good job
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PandoraMichaelis Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you..but im not that happy how it came out,but thx anyways! :)
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dragondave10 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It will be ok. Sometimes what you don't like, it will be one of your victories.
Good job anyway. Welcome.
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KopaLover Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
That is amazing. *sniff*
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PandoraMichaelis Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :D!
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KopaLover Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
yer welcome!
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moon-lit-words Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
i've always liked shorter lines, for both prose and poetry. to me, you did well with that c:

please keep up your spirit and your writing!

thanks for sharing with #SayItHere
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