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Life with a semicolon

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I just lost my best friend;I will find a new one
Kids bully me at school;I will show them that they're wrong
Suicide is my only thought;I will think about life and its offers
I think I have diabetes;I will live life with it,and not give up
I am too shy;I will get out of my shell
I am ugly,fat,and I will never find love;I am smart,one of a kind and I will find love

I don't live my life with a . ,
I live it with a ;
because there is always 
much more to it.
Im pretty sure you all know what a semicolon ";" means if its used in a sentence,if you dint well then a semicolon is used in a sentence to seperate 2 indepndent cluses.Also im sure some of you have heard about writing a ; on your wrist and how it shows that you you could have stopped,but you didnt and kept going.When I heard about it,I was really inspired and decided to write this based on life events or feelings that I had/have and how instead of ending it with a period I kept going with a semicolon.You can also view this as the negative and then the positive..either way its fine ^^
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Lillian13's avatar
I must learn to use semicolons; because they will improve my writing.